My First commentary

[IlDomIl]

hey guys just give this a watch its my first video on my channel, looking for ways to improve and to get some feedback to help me!

View: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6uk2ojnX4Y

Thanks!

 

[Carlos]

Saw the commentary, and I think you did it well! That's good considering this is your first commentary.

What's your PSN? We should play sometime.

 

[IlDomIl]

Thank you very much, really pleased to hear that and my psn is D-I-K